How is the beginning of my story?

So this is a initial page of my story called "Writings," as well as you would similar to to know if you were celebration of a mass a book, if you would keep reading. Is a commencement as well boring?
I am twelve years old, by a way.
Kaycee Conway tearfully took a single final yearning peek during her aged house. Her comparison sister, Sara, poked her shoulder with a prolonged purple fingernail.
"Stop seeking back, you’ll get upset," she pronounced strictly.
"I’m dissapoint already," Kaycee pronounced in a parsimonious voice.
"You’ll get some-more upset," Sara said. She tossed her long, blonde hair. "I’m not upset. This place is a spook town. Plus, in LA, you can live my mental condition of being an actress."
"Syracuse is my home," Kaycee insisted.
"That’s what you pronounced about a final house, too. Kansas is so rural. you am not a nation girl. Los Angeles will be amazing."
"Then we’ll get used to it, afterwards we’ll pierce again, as well as I’ll be upset, as well as you’ll be observant ‘California is so urban. you am not a city girl.”’
"Shut up. Dad won’t have us pierce if you get a job. Heck, father won’t even have to work any some-more since I’ll be earning all a income you need carrying people from all over a place venerate me. If father doesn’t work, you do not move, so do not be concerned about it.
Sara desired a spotlight. She was pleasing as well as talented, she could sing, dance, act, as well as fool around about 5 opposite instruments. Sara was fourteen as well as customarily about 4 feet as well as eleven inches tall, whilst Kaycee was eleven as well as about 5 inches taller than her teenage sister. Sara had big, round, really blue eyes as well as porcelain skin, as well as Kaycee had black hair, suntanned skin from personification soccer all summer, as well as hazel eyes made similar to almonds with a pointy finish incited towards her turn nose.
Sara a single after another speaking. "Then you will jot down a strain as well as pointer upon with a jot down company, as well as you will have even some-more money. That’s what’s starting to occur when you pierce to LA."
They climbed in to a behind chair of their small black Honda. Mom as well as Dad were in a front, as well as as father pulled out of a driveway, Kaycee put her bend upon a armrest as well as complacent her chin upon her fist.
"But if you turn a important singer," Kaycee pronounced suddenly. "Then we’ll be divided all a time upon tour."
"I can go with my manager," Sara said. "That equates to no Mom, no Dad, no you."
"Meano," Kaycee grumbled. "You’re not even fit to be a meanie. You’re a meano."
"Who says Sara is apropos a important singer?" Mom asked from a front seat.
"Sara says," Kaycee replied.
"I never pronounced you was actally starting to," pronounced Sara. "I only pronounced it was an oppurtunity."
"You did contend you were starting to," Kaycee reminded her.
"Shut up." Sara commanded.
"We’ll see," Mom said. "Are you starting to turn a important actress, too?"
Both Kaycee as well as Sara knew mother was teasing.
"Yes, mother," Sara answered coldly. "If any a single wants to sinecure me, afterwards of course."
Mom seemed amused, though did not contend anything more.
It was a prolonged time prior to they stopped during a motel for a night. Sara as well as Kaycee would have to share a bed which night.
It had taken utterly a conflict to get Sara to nap in a same bed as Kaycee.
"But mom," she had whined. "Kaycee snores as well as flops all over a place. Remember when you lived in Oklahoma as well as you common a room with her? you couldn’t nap a total year you lived there since she wouldn’t stop snoring. And you know how each time you pierce upon a initial night you customarily share a air matress? Well, a single time in a center of a night she flopped so tough she sent me flying. you can’t share a bed with her, even only for a single night. It’s not fair."
"Fair is overrated," was Kaycee’s input.
you would similar to to listen to all honest opinions. This is only a initial page of a story. Thanks for reading.